Definitely liked it. You've got the personality & smooth, genuine style to make it rich. IMO - 8:00 is maybe a bit long, but only b/c there were a couple things (ie. Reading emails), where you could say, "see it right below,this video link, or if you get schnazzy, do a,pop-up or even piece of paper you hold up... That may just tighten it up a bit. Great first run, keep it up.
Thanks Grant! Definitely will consider that stuff in the future. I want site what I was going to do so I just went off the fly. Some editing would not hurt if I'm giving out sites!